Once again, it's all about capturing a single moment's perception that contains some kind of contrast. Only Haiku must contain at least one image from nature and a 'word' that clearly indicates the season. Japanese Haiku of course, must have 17 or fewer onji, arranged in a 5-7-5 format. But JH are written on one line, since 5-7-5 is a normal onji distribution, even in prose. An onji is different than a syllable (the word Haiku has three onji since in Japanese all the vowels are pronounced, but only two syllables in English) I try to keep my Haiku under 15 syllables, but generally don't employ the 5-7-5 structure, since it makes little sense in English. Enjoy:
Spring breeze
my wiper blades fill-
with cherry blossoms
on the sidewalk
only the mailman's footprints
part deep snow
starry sky-
tip of the incense flickers
falls
summer morning
my finger traces-
the cool headstone
September 1st-
the goalposts cast
a longer shadow
Cold night alone-
a mug of hot cocoa
is not enough
shelter at midnight
a drunk softly pissing-
the next bed
moonrise in the windshield
sunset in the rear-view
Spring darkness
a garbage truck grinds-
the chirping birds
behind the Carry-out
steam rises-
from yellow snow
shards of glass
beside the stare
of a stiff deer
May 29th-
only sunlight fills
this classroom
New Year's morning
the birds chirping-
too loudly
August night
police chopper drowning out-
the crickets
rainy night
alone in the darkness-
with All Blues
frost on the window-
under three blankets
I aim the remote
beached boat
beneath the worn planks-
a seagull's cry
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Joel great Haiku poems.
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